I used to be a whore
and so
so many are on
the complicated pandemic
of love
just thinking about it
can make you swoon
or wretch
abstinence
is
easily-breakable bracelets
tossed carelessly
into the cellar
people who abstain
are
black-and-white
house-bound
too ugly to get laid, living
under the alias of ‘abstinent’, ‘ unhappily
booty-free’
they wear glasses
read the Bible
and write
Poet's note: This is a found poem created from the description of an allpoetry.com contest courtesy of the very young and very talented poet “greenewhiplash”. The title of the contest was “Watiting ‘til Marriage: A contest on Romance and Society"
Dedication
DEDICATION
To RKS
you were my first
you could have been my last
you are my lost
And to YHWH
You are my first
You are my last
I'm no longer lost
Isaiah 61:1-3
"...beauty for ashes..."
- Mildred Achoch, 4th September, 2011
ACKNOWLEDGMENTS
A big thank you to David Citino and his amazing, inspirational book "Paperwork", for reminding me that poems - and poets - are worth something.
Many thanks to my namesake "Mimi" Mik for taking the time to read my crazy poems, and for giving me her invaluable feedback. You rock!
Asante sana to Murfy's Flaw for being one of the coolest and 'down-to-earthest' Kenyan rock bands! And for allowing their awesome song "In Silence" to be part of the soundtrack of this book of poems.
I salute the prolific poet Phatalvision for reading ALL my poems! By the way sir, "old school" is "gold 'n' cool" :-)
I am very thankful to my mum, dad and sister, for putting up with me all these years. I love you!
To RKS
you were my first
you could have been my last
you are my lost
And to YHWH
You are my first
You are my last
I'm no longer lost
Isaiah 61:1-3
"...beauty for ashes..."
- Mildred Achoch, 4th September, 2011
ACKNOWLEDGMENTS
A big thank you to David Citino and his amazing, inspirational book "Paperwork", for reminding me that poems - and poets - are worth something.
Many thanks to my namesake "Mimi" Mik for taking the time to read my crazy poems, and for giving me her invaluable feedback. You rock!
Asante sana to Murfy's Flaw for being one of the coolest and 'down-to-earthest' Kenyan rock bands! And for allowing their awesome song "In Silence" to be part of the soundtrack of this book of poems.
I salute the prolific poet Phatalvision for reading ALL my poems! By the way sir, "old school" is "gold 'n' cool" :-)
I am very thankful to my mum, dad and sister, for putting up with me all these years. I love you!
Wednesday, October 12, 2011
People Who Abstain (a self-poetry8?)
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oooh don't be too hard on people who 'abstain'
ReplyDeletehe he he actually, the last verse is meant to be a bit sarcastic :-)
ReplyDeletepeople who abstain are also free from STD's and look much younger than their sexually active agemates :)
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